Feedback from teacher
Sarah and I showed the first cut of Seventeen to our Media Studies teacher, Sir Nadeem, so he could highlight where there was room for improvement and give constructive criticism; he pointed out several jumps at certain points that had been overlooked by us in two of the scenes along with a scene where a line of dialogue was being repeated, instructed us to add background music appropriate to our genre in the first scene of the film opening as it was missing, and advised us to get rid of unnecessary shots throughout the film opening. He also appreciated the editing and colourgrading of the last scene in our film opening.